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Re: Road rage
Posted: Wed Oct 08, 2008 5:49 pm
by zx-10r
hmm short enought that she reads it
but yes, a firm objective tone is better than anger as it makes them feel guilty
that is unless she is a heartless bitch in which case she wont feel guilt.
Re: Road rage
Posted: Wed Oct 08, 2008 9:44 pm
by Gosling1
The concept was great............but the execution was way too long.
Mate, I stopped reading after the 3rd paragraph, and I wanted to read that note - She would have taken one look at the length, and thrown it away.
It was great for 3 paragraphs - short and sweet is good.
Re: Road rage
Posted: Wed Oct 08, 2008 10:13 pm
by Daisy
What he said. First 3 paragraphs are all you need.
Re: Road rage
Posted: Thu Oct 09, 2008 9:12 am
by Shifty
All good - I couldnt' find the house and writing it made me feel better.
Maybe I'll just kick her mirror off next time I see her
